Monday, September 25, 2017

birthday 🎉

.               2016 birthday 🎉 🎄 
Goa: Write about my holiday 

Once upon a time in a land far away, 10 months and 4 days ago I turned 12 years old we went on a ✈️ plane to see my Nana, Grandad, Auntie, Uncle , And two cousins . In the plane I was sitting next to my sister IT WAS  BORINGGGGgg.   
30 minutes later .....
We're  hereeeeee . I look over my shoulder and see my family. I was So EXCITED, I hadn't seen them in like 50 years. The whole way home what am I getting for my birthday ?... But no response....

15 minutes in a car that felt like 4 hours.

 Can I PLEASEEEEEEEE open my presents? 🎁 
Is it my birthday today...?
Did I ever get to open them ?! you will never know....
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2017 at 12:18 PM

    It was funny and cool😎, but you might want to check your spellling.

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  2. Mr AdamsSeptember 26, 2017 at 9:22 AM

    Nice reply Grace, you are being supportive. Can you tell Javae how she can improve her work as well? Look at the information on how to Add a comment below to help you.

    1. Something positive- yes you did this, but say why
    2. Thoughtful- have you done this?
    3. Thoughtful- ideas for next time? Yes, you have told her to check her spelling- but maybe tell her what word.

    Well done.

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